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Oh, Mr Sun

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Oh, Mr Sun

You are so cute

Oh, Mr Sun

I want to be like you

Smiling so brightly

Forever cheerful

Like the birds on the trees

Always gleeful

 

Oh, Mr Sun

You are so bright

Oh, Mr Sun

Where will you be tonight?

I looked at the sky

Haze covered you blind

No fresh air. Makes me feel

like want to cry


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In response to Writing 201, Day 7: Neighbourhood, Ballad, Assonance

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9 thoughts on “Oh, Mr Sun

    1. Oh yes! Mr Golden Sun! πŸ˜€ I was trying so hard to recall that Barney song. Thank you for reminding me! πŸ˜€ Really lost touch with Barney lately..haha πŸ˜€

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